Because I'm trying to make the new page more like an actual game/book/movie page, the comments, as well as the Q&A and Maintenence sub-pages (which nobody cared about), are all fused into one space, the talk page.

I wonder what everyone will think of the revision. I, for one, am happy that I was able to take the first two pages of the original first chapter and make a nine page chapter out of it. A.J. two (Smashboards) 06:00, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Errors[edit source]

Why is chapter 1 so full of errors its slightly unreadable? I'll remove the symbols if you don't want to.  Armageddon11! Dissicon ff12 Gab2.png 13:33, April 8, 2011 (UTC)
I found out that my computer has Microsoft Office Word 2007, and so when I moved the story into it from the other word program I was using (WordPerfect X3), it took all the Quotation marks (" and ') and messed them up. The beginning "'s became a capital A, the ending ones became the @ symbol, and the ''s an = sign. It was late, and I was tired, and it was nine pages worth to go through, and I didn't really get to it, mostly because I didn't really want to. I made a comment about it in the upload edit.
If you want to fix it, then go right ahead. It'll certainly make it easier for everyone to read it, that's for sure. Thanks if you do, and no problem if you don't.
On another note, even through all the errors, what did you think of the revision Pocky, as compared to the original? It looks like currently that the first chapter might get split into three in the revision, each chapter as at least as long as the original first. AJtwosig.gif 19:43, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Font problems[edit source]

I wonder why the Segoe Print won't show up for me in chapter 3. It shows up fine in Microsoft Word, but it refuses to show up properly on here. Does it look like that for everyone else? You should be able to tell where it's supposed to be. A.J. two (Smashboards) 19:27, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it. --ShirubaKurono Dissicon ff13 Lig3.png 20:11, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
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