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Plot[edit source]

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NPC's[edit source]

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Issues I want to address[edit source]

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Main Protagonist[edit source]

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Not Able To Start[edit source]

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User:A.J. two/Userbox

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User:A.J. two/Userbox

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Beginning[edit source]

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Road Block?[edit source]

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An idea for a class[edit source]

This is for my upcoming character: The class "Knight of Hell", he's capable of calling several types of sword from another dimension: Katanas, regular swords, knight swords, dual swords, broadswords and smallswords. He also has a great control in the dark arts, ah? What do you think? Can I add it? Bone of my Sword 20:53, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

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The other dimension thing was an idea to explain why he has so many weapons, as for the other thing, let's eliminate the darkness thing, then, Gareth would just use his swords, Darkness is losing its "badassness" anyway, don't you think ? XD Bone of my Sword 21:11, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

This sounds more like something that a antagonist would use. For the PC's, there are ten classes that you can choose from, but the antagonists don't fall under that restriction. Any new classes you make can be used for the villains, since they have to be even more deadly then the heroes. Plus, once we get to it, each of the PC classes will have an "advanced" version - a better version of that class that the PC's will becoe later on in the story. A.J. two (Smashboards) 21:17, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, if you ask me, using a unique class for a hero who came in halfway through the story? Sounds a tad like favorites and overpowering. Seriously, can't he be like Gilgamesh or Firion? Carry along a crap load of swords? Bringing [bleep] from another dimension is like what an antagonist should use (Now that I think about it, they PCs need to fight Gilgy along the way, it would be awesome XD). Just make him like Firion. If he has his own class, then all the other PCs need one too. And it's too late for that, considering we're like, halfway through the story :/ --ShirubaKurono Dissicon ff13 Lig3.png 01:45, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
There only going to be four chapters Silver? Because that would be sort of awkward. But I have a way to make everyone unique: If you noticed, there is an "Advanced Discipline" section next to the respective PC Discipline. We can evolve each of our character into a unique class. AJtwosig.gif 04:00, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
Four chapters seem to be very short to me, and what the whole point of the characters have a Advanced Discipline this is not a game? NeoZEROX 04:15, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
The story isn't going to be only four chapters; I was bringing to light the fact that we aren't very far into the second one, but Silver said that we're already halfway through. And as for the advanced, it was just an idea. A.J. two (Smashboards) 04:23, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
I was exaggerating. I guess what I was trying to say is that making a unique class is not serious, but making your character overpowered is. He should make the character like Firion so he isn't overpowered. Then, we can all be equal. Nobody needs unique classes. --SilverCrono 07:05, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
I need to point out that this is a story, not a game. Our current system is pretty unbalanced. It's a canon plot point that Alchemists and Clerics are the most useful Disciplines (the plot point responsible for Haven being lifted into the air, no less). Your own character, Silver, is pretty much the most powerful Gunslinger on the planet because of his never running out of firearms (and as such, ammo), and always having the one needed for every situation (sniper rifle, assault rifle, RPG ect). So it's not like characters can't be overpowered without a unique Discipline. A gap in power between this character and some of the others should be fine if written well. Also note that we're only one and a half chapters in. That's nothing.  Armageddon11! Dissicon ff12 Gab2.png 08:12, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
Again, I state I was exaggerating about the story chapters. And no, my character isn't overpowered; as I'm sure his character sheet says, he gets tired if he constantly pulls guns out, and he is not above others. A couple shots/hits and he's dead. Also, my character pretty much only uses two guns (revolver, rifle). The guy he was trying to make would have swords and magic abilities; now you can't say that's not overpowered. Again, I say make him like Firion; lots of weapons and a small, miniscule work of magic here and there. (But not Shield BAsh, or he WOULD be overpowered <_<) --SilverCrono 15:19, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
It doesn't. He's so "overpowered" he flies at one point. Flies. And shrugs off leg injuries with just a "Imma need a cure spell later." Also, magic has already been omitted from the character sheet.  Armageddon11! Dissicon ff12 Gab2.png 16:14, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
Actually, he's not mage, check. If this is causing so much trouble, I can change it and we're good to go, right? I want to appear in the story already XD. Bone of my Sword 19:47, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Something needs to be done[edit source]

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Final Opinion[edit source]

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