I'll be reading over it a few more times to get a better understanding but the first thing I noticed was a lack of spacing between paragraphs. That's a big thing for me is to be able to not feel overloaded with too many words at a time.

There's also a few other things but that would be just me nit-picking and feeling like I'm being rude. I'll come back later when I've had time to look back through it.

I havent been able to read it entirely but first off im impressed in how much work you out into this. If you want my honest opinion then i think you should put in some headers, like Fire cave or Timber. just so that readers can find the part they are stuck in easily. Im redding it further but that is my first thing of notice. Keep up the good work!

I had a little time today and worked on the aspects mentioned by both of you.

@Omega AK1 , think the spacing as it is now works? I still need to read everything throughly, so it's possible some paragraphs are too big (once I have more time, I'll try to fix it, but if you mention them yourself that would be a great help too).

Who says about the paragraphs lenghts, says about the wording. That was actually one of my biggest concerns with this guide: if I was throwing too many personal comments, being too repetitive, too confusing, etc. So, if anyone notices some wording that could be redone for sake of understanding what's going on, I'd appreciate the heads up.

As for @Cloudseeker XV suggestion, I started a little something of the sort, don't have time to go over it all right now. Think that'll do? It's at least a start; I was thinking of changing the font and/or size to give it more emphasis, but I'll work on that idea once I have more time on my hands.

Oh, and thank you both for the suggestions. I appreciate greatly the help.

I've got about 2 hours for my flight back home, I'll be looking for anything I can find that might need changing.

Paragraphs do look alot better. It's easier to read a lot of information if the reader doesn't feel overloaded. Granted, I'm not an English professor but I do represent the more average reader.

Also, I do like how party members are color coordinated to make it easier to understand who is being talked about and when the are mentioned. Very well done there.

My math exam has passed for now, meaning I have more time to work on the guide, which was what I was doing.

I haven't re-read everything yet, but I reached as far as Deep Sea Research Center, so there isn't much missing. I would still re-read it all one or two more times.

Anyway, I worked on getting those location titles done, decided to keep them simple, only the size that's a bit above the rest. I also cut some longer paragraphs and gave some emphasis on certain texts with bold. I also managed to correct a few grammatical mistakes. I did not, however, read anything related to bosses, I'll do that another day and focus exclusively on those parts.

Still haven't worked on placing the links and lists, but I prefer to go over the whole guide once and take care of what I find before working on that.

Currently debating if Laguna sequences should have locations titles too or not, since the sequence themselves are already separated from the rest with their exclusive divisor, and if I should have the Sewers direction in topics instead of in a paragraph.

Alright. I finally finished that first re-read and added the end part with the links and lists. It's essentially done, only missing the answer sheet to the SeeD exams and re-read it all a few more times to correct any mistakes and eventually add anything.

I'm mostly useless during the week when it comes to analysis since I'm really drained after work. My biggest concern was overloading the reader with too much at once but it looks like you've done a good job at breaking it down.